Obituary

With me, since school, you've been
through the thick and also the thin

You stuck to me like lovers should
When I was beat, or feeling good

Other friends, at least a few
suggested that I tell you, adieu

But I always, ignored them
keeping us together, in one frame

Alas, the devil in me grew
finally, today, I murdered you

Maybe in future I'll miss you, even be sad
but so far, so good; doesn't feel bad

For now, Goodbye; Adios, my friend
It's time to move on, it's not the end.

16 comments:

Rohit Talwar said...

I want to change these lines at a few places and mix it with some funky drums and heavy metal riffs (Oooooooh baby.)

But, what's up? What happened?

Aarbee said...

Can it be your moustache?

I am sorry if I am being silly about something serious, but your title scared me, then I was confused, and now I think it's the muchhis. Tell me it's the moustache.

~ Deeps ~ said...

so what is it ?

Kanu said...

yeah...what is it?

It does not pay to be this secretive...or maybe it does...

Nicely put together though...the last line especially

It's time to move on, it's not the end.

Subhadip said...

@RT
It would be better as hip hop, whattasay?

@RB
Congrats to your sense of deduction!

@Deeps
:) got the answer?

@Kanu
I was not being secretive, I was trying to give subtle hints!

Butterfly said...

You shaved off your moustache? Hmmm....

What do u think about ur new look though? Do u look better or worse?

But, the hints were really subtle. Dunno how Richa guessed it!:-)

Subhadip said...

@Butterfly
Everyone tells me I look "different". Different is not necessarily bad, so I am happy with my new look :-)

Aarbee said...

Thank you thank you. :D

~ Deeps ~ said...

so when will u do the honours and put ur moochie sans pic out here on blog :D

Rohit Talwar said...

Dadu?!

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Ok, erm, I didn't check space... and whaaaaaaa.

IG said...

So finally you got rid of your south indian look... good ...whatever keeps you excited..or did someone tell you to get rid of it???

B. O'Hemian said...

@Deeps
What pic?

@RT
:)

@IG
Who will tell me :( ?

Sanjit said...

Oh God!! Why dont u upload ur latest snap...I dont think I will like ur civilian look.

B. O'Hemian said...

What civilian look? Its the man who matters; not his military or civilian look :-P

Bhaw said...

i relate to this feeling of lookign diff !!! :D So u did huh finally !!!! proud of ya !!! we should in life let go things that are very dear to us .. cos unless we do - how can we ever realise how dear they really were ?

B. O'Hemian said...

I am sure you know the feeling. Yeah, what's in a look anyway!